Here is my peer review for Eyal's Content Outline. I think he has a great start so far for this project but here are some tips to make it even stronger!
I think the outline meets the purpose of the project overall. However something I noticed is that the first and second body sections may run together so make sure that the same things aren't repeated in both! Also, maybe for the last section (since it is undecided) strengths and weaknesses of your writing in the course or your writing process could be evaluated? Something like that.
Overall I think Eyal has a great handle on this project so far and his content outline will definitely help him develop his project next week.
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